A long time ago, Venus, the god of love, was jealous of a mortal. It was a classic story of Snow White. Venus was jealous that a girl (Psyche) on earth was being compared to her beauty. She had to get rid of her, and she called on her son, Cupid. Cupid was the right deity for the job! He was always bringing havoc to people; ruining budding romances, steady partners, and even strong marriages. And he had his pick of women for his own pleasure.Venus ordered Cupid to ruin Psyche's life. "Trap her in a terrible marriage with some old, ugly guy. Then I will be the 'fairest of them all' again, no contest." Cupid went out to find Psyche, intending to do just as his mother had asked. However, things took a slight turn when he laid eyes on her. "She's beautiful," he thought. And suddenly, it was as if one of his own arrows had pierced him. He was in love. He knew he would have to hide her from his jealous mother, so he concocted a plan to have her come to his home in the heavens.
He found Apollo's oracle and begged that he would give a prophecy that Psyche be taken to the top of Mount Everest so that she would be given to a man in marriage. The oracle did as Cupid requested, and very quickly, Psyche was taken to the mountain. For Psyche's safety, he had to keep himself hidden from all. So he sent a servant to bring Psyche to his home. He couldn't risk her finding out that he was Cupid. If word got out, his mother would be furious. However, he still tried to welcome her into his home. He sent maids to help her, the best cooks to prepare meals for her, and there was a mass of pearls, jewels, and other fine gifts for her.
Despite this, Psyche was miserable. She spent her first day in tears. Cupid was torn; he could do nothing but watch from afar. Eventually, after the sun went down, he went to her and tried to console her. He tried his best lines, but it didn't help. Eventually, the two fell asleep on opposite sides of the bed. The next morning, when Psyche got up, Cupid was gone. She was exhausted from all the crying the previous day and tried to go about some normal routines: brushing her teeth, eating some food, etc., when she found a note addressed to her:
"My love, I'm sorry for the circumstances, but Fate has put us together. I'm a kind man that wishes the best for you. Please give me a chance." Cupid also decided to write a poem, trying to woo the girl.
Author's Note:
In the original story module, there's no introduction to how Cupid actually met Psyche. The story starts with Venus jealous of Psyche because of her looks and the attention she is receiving on earth, and she tells Cupid to make her fall in love with an atrocious man, and that's the end of that. There's no more explanation in the story. The next scene is where an oracle says a prophecy that Psyche will have a "fatal marriage," and that she needs to be taken to a mountain so she can get married. Then, the parents take her there and just leave! She is then taken up into the clouds, into a beautiful place, which is Cupid's home! Every night, in the dark, a man gets into bed with Psyche, "makes Psyche his wife", and they eventually fall in love (a little creepy and suspicious). But Psyche can't see his face and doesn't know who this person is: if it is a monster or a god! Later, of course, she finds out that Cupid is her mysterious husband, but that's part of another story. So for my retelling of the story, I wanted to write from Cupid's perspective on the story, how he sees and falls in love with Psyche. I've also added in a couple more tweaks, specifically, that first wedding night.
Bibliography. Apuleius's Golden Ass, as translated into English by Tony Kline. Web source.
He found Apollo's oracle and begged that he would give a prophecy that Psyche be taken to the top of Mount Everest so that she would be given to a man in marriage. The oracle did as Cupid requested, and very quickly, Psyche was taken to the mountain. For Psyche's safety, he had to keep himself hidden from all. So he sent a servant to bring Psyche to his home. He couldn't risk her finding out that he was Cupid. If word got out, his mother would be furious. However, he still tried to welcome her into his home. He sent maids to help her, the best cooks to prepare meals for her, and there was a mass of pearls, jewels, and other fine gifts for her.
Despite this, Psyche was miserable. She spent her first day in tears. Cupid was torn; he could do nothing but watch from afar. Eventually, after the sun went down, he went to her and tried to console her. He tried his best lines, but it didn't help. Eventually, the two fell asleep on opposite sides of the bed. The next morning, when Psyche got up, Cupid was gone. She was exhausted from all the crying the previous day and tried to go about some normal routines: brushing her teeth, eating some food, etc., when she found a note addressed to her:
"My love, I'm sorry for the circumstances, but Fate has put us together. I'm a kind man that wishes the best for you. Please give me a chance." Cupid also decided to write a poem, trying to woo the girl.
"Roses are red,
Violets are blue.
Here's a ring,
I love you."
This made Psyche feel a tiny bit better. She was a romantic like most girls. Cupid was quite pleased with himself. The crying had stopped, and he couldn't wait to return to the bed that night. It seemed like hours past when finally the sun went down. Cupid got into bed, and from there, the love between them grew.
Cupid and Psyche, published by L. Prang & Co
Source: Wikimedia Commons
In the original story module, there's no introduction to how Cupid actually met Psyche. The story starts with Venus jealous of Psyche because of her looks and the attention she is receiving on earth, and she tells Cupid to make her fall in love with an atrocious man, and that's the end of that. There's no more explanation in the story. The next scene is where an oracle says a prophecy that Psyche will have a "fatal marriage," and that she needs to be taken to a mountain so she can get married. Then, the parents take her there and just leave! She is then taken up into the clouds, into a beautiful place, which is Cupid's home! Every night, in the dark, a man gets into bed with Psyche, "makes Psyche his wife", and they eventually fall in love (a little creepy and suspicious). But Psyche can't see his face and doesn't know who this person is: if it is a monster or a god! Later, of course, she finds out that Cupid is her mysterious husband, but that's part of another story. So for my retelling of the story, I wanted to write from Cupid's perspective on the story, how he sees and falls in love with Psyche. I've also added in a couple more tweaks, specifically, that first wedding night.
Bibliography. Apuleius's Golden Ass, as translated into English by Tony Kline. Web source.
Your story was so good!! It definitely made Cupid less icky.
ReplyDeleteHi Jessica,
ReplyDeleteThis was an good story that made me feel good for the both of the characters at the end. I thought that the tweaks that you made to the story were necessary and helped give a better view of the situation with cupid. I am glad that he was able to cheer her up. Great story!
Hey Jessica!
ReplyDeleteI loved your story because you described the emotions of the characters well in my opinion. I also enjoyed the ending because it made me as a reader feel good. I also think the you described everything with Cupid well and it made it easier as a reader to visualize the scene. Overall great job and it was fun to read your version of this story!
Hey Jessica,
ReplyDeleteI really liked your take on the original myth. It is good to see that you were able to flesh out Cupid's character and make the story a little less creepy, as you mentioned in your Author's Note. It is really refreshing too see when people are able to point out all the archaic/creepy aspect of known legends. I am glad that you addressed that and was able to recreate a story that makes the story not as bad. Great job!
Jessica,
ReplyDeleteGreek mythology is one of my favorite things, which is probably why I chose to do it for my Storybook. I love your take on this myth, mainly because it makes it easier to understand what is going on between the two characters. One of the things I noticed is that you didn't really describe the characters, which would have been a good way to get your readers to connect more with them. However, you did a good job with their personalities. I think that you get a lot more out of your take on the myth than one would when reading the original story. All in all, you did great!
I really enjoyed this take on Cupid's story! I honestly struggle not to find the whole thing completely unfair - Venus being jealous / Cupid not revealing himself to her - but your take on the story added some sweet background to their love story that made it a lot more believable! Great job!
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